Sunday, August 27, 2017

Great Writing Eric!


Congratulations Eric for winning this week's Principal's Award for trying really hard in writing. Eric has written some really creative narratives over the last few weeks.
Here is his story, Sophie and Buddy Go For a Run.

Sophie and Buddy go for a Run.

Sophie and Buddy went for a long run. Suddenly Buddy saw his lost red ball in the freezing cold river. He jumped into the cold water. The water was deep and buddy couldn't swim. “Hold on Buddy, I'm going to save you!” Sophie said loudly. Sophie got a mountain climbing rope and threw the rope at Buddy. Buddy got the rope in his sharp teeth and sophie pulled him hard. Finally, Buddy and his red ball got out of the river.

By Eric





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